Final Screening

This was an interesting and informative screening, giving me the final few tweaks I needed, both from Mrs Weatherson and my classmates. Two of their feedback sheets are shown below...

2nd Screening

Peer Assessment...

Initial Screening

 Feedback.

Creative Commentary: 'Don't over do the focus pulls - they should be done with purpose - you should only use them to show significance of one object to another in the same scene. Your sound needs to be regulated - at the moment the diegetic sound is too loud - it is good just too loud - see Dani about how to do this. You are thinking a little bit about the framing but you need to make more deliberate actions - why do we from a close up of the guys face to the close up of the feet to then tilt back to his face?' - Mrs Weatherson


Creative Suggestions: 'YOU HAVE TO HAVE ALL FILES IN YOUR MEDIA DRIVE AND TAKEN FROM YOUR MEDIA DRIVE - OTHERWISE THEY WILL BE LOST. I want to see more thought when it comes to lighting - and framing for purpose - consider all the time what you want your audience to understand from your opening?' - Mrs Weatherson

I also got feedback from my classmates...

Preliminary Task